- Erotic Poetry
- Passion's rehabilitation
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Click hereWe are addicted to the same drug.
It oozes from pores as vapor and slick
spit and fingered, both greedy for the last
lick of fingers like batter from the bowl.
Tongue cleaned, I breathe our breath
of vaporized passion.
Come darling
let us make more
for you,
no you
no, you.
Desire fueled by desire
Consumption fills the consumed.
Deliver the poison
drip the antidote from your tongue.
Rub it in the sore spots
numb the ache for the plunge and plunder.
I quiver in withdraw.
I want you curved and hungry
Hungry for the structure barely balanced
with a rise and press into places
driven into a whimper.
- COMMENTS
Tathagataover 19 years agolike this image:
~It oozes from pores as vapor and slick
spit and fingered, both greedy for the last
lick of fingers like batter from the bowl.~
Very erotic and yet not " overt"
I hope to see more from you
Anonymousover 19 years agothank you for the comments. Withdraw was a mistake, it should be withdrawal. or is it withdrawl. I do not like that word.
"CQ, CQ!"
I am not sure what that means
"73s & 88s"
or that.
?
GingerAnne
Reltneover 19 years agoWelcome aboard.
I only question the last word in one line.
"I quiver in withdraw." Why not "withdrawal"?
73s & 88s
WickedEveover 19 years agoAnd you prove that passion and desire (which often are used so lamely in poems) can be added quite nicely into a well written poem.
Angelineover 19 years agoThe use of imagery lends a certain restraint and yet it's very sexual and clearly put. Really good writing.
