All Comments on 'Passion's rehabilitation'

The use of imagery lends a certain restraint and yet it's very sexual and clearly put. Really good writing.

And you prove that passion and desire (which often are used so lamely in poems) can be added quite nicely into a well written poem.

Welcome aboard.

I only question the last word in one line.

"I quiver in withdraw." Why not "withdrawal"?

73s & 88s

thank you for the comments. Withdraw was a mistake, it should be withdrawal. or is it withdrawl. I do not like that word.

"CQ, CQ!"

I am not sure what that means

"73s & 88s"

or that.

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GingerAnne

like this image:

~It oozes from pores as vapor and slick

spit and fingered, both greedy for the last

lick of fingers like batter from the bowl.~

Very erotic and yet not " overt"

I hope to see more from you