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Click hereDawn awakes with diamonds
Clothing the morning surf
Glistening in the summer sun
As seashell lions sillouette
The breaking waves
Echoing their mighty roar
Salty air pricks the senses
As a chilly breeze
Numbs the flesh
- COMMENTS
Xectxny19Xover 19 years agoand such a tranquil quality to it! I absolutely loved it!
bearleeover 19 years agoI'm sucker for anything having to do with Dawn-very nice :)
MaverickManover 19 years agoYou have beautifully captured the feeling of standing on the beach in the early morning, hopefully with a lover. The images stirred my memories of my own experiences.
CharleyHover 19 years agoQuite enjoyed this, on the one hand simple, on the other hand complex poem. It reads to me both of sea and relationship. Beautiful images.
My Erotic Taleover 19 years agoloved the way the words seared to the point
with a short witty poem~ thanks~
