All Comments on 'Dawn'

I loved that first line "dawn awakes with diamonds" Beautiful.

loved the way the words seared to the point

with a short witty poem~ thanks~

Quite enjoyed this, on the one hand simple, on the other hand complex poem. It reads to me both of sea and relationship. Beautiful images.

You have beautifully captured the feeling of standing on the beach in the early morning, hopefully with a lover. The images stirred my memories of my own experiences.

I'm sucker for anything having to do with Dawn-very nice :)

and such a tranquil quality to it! I absolutely loved it!