Pictures on a Bureau

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A diabetic’s warning card and a candy heart,
as if someone is keeping track of it all.
One part is pretense, the other, hope.

The goldtail frog clambers across the wooden
plain, darting key and bracelet mountains,
pinned in on all sides by someone else’s expectations.

An antique doll with a broken arm and a bottle
of Chinese sedatives, a chapstick and Alice’s
looking glass, smudged with makeup and powder dust.

It’s strewn around my photo like there’s purpose
to being captured in this useless still life,
beyond the frozen smile on my face.

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WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
:)

Love the poem. I can't say what I love because I love it all, but in a way, that's saying what I love.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in fridays review

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
Perfect blend

of the familiar with the unfamiliar

"frozen smile on my face."

"someone else’s expectations."

are familiar phrases, easily graspable.

Well done, if you keep writtin', I shall stop out of shame.

I can't match this.

postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
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I really liked it, the almost spicy smell of dusting powder, littl kid feel of exploring the forbidden dresser top...