All Comments on 'Pictures on a Bureau'

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postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
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I really liked it, the almost spicy smell of dusting powder, littl kid feel of exploring the forbidden dresser top...

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
Perfect blend

of the familiar with the unfamiliar

"frozen smile on my face."

"someone else’s expectations."

are familiar phrases, easily graspable.

Well done, if you keep writtin', I shall stop out of shame.

I can't match this.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in fridays review

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
:)

Love the poem. I can't say what I love because I love it all, but in a way, that's saying what I love.

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