All Comments on 'Yukiko's First Valentine'

I like how you took me into different culture. You gave us a wonderful, tender story, and I loved it.

Good Luck,

Brian

Sore kara Goddess, Yukiko-chan wa hashikashimashta-kunai desho, ne?

watashi wa wawakarimasen. boku wa shikoshi hanashimas.

Somewhat incomplete, needing a bit more depth in some situations, but the writing is very sweet, and the story is kind, unusual, and very human. A five. Write more, explore the depths more.

mismused

I can honestly say that I still love these characters, and I like this version of the story much better than the previous version you showed me (not to detract from that one considering I already told you I liked it) And I really do hope you continue with these characters

:-D

I'm new, very new, to Literotica - stumbled on it yesterday. Read a few; some are good but there sure are alot of them out there with really agressive characters doing all sorts of outlandish things. Very refreshing to read your story which combines subtlety and nuance and without a lead female character who is begging strangers to screw her. I have also authored a couple of erotic pieces. Don't know if you'd be interested in reading or not. You probably receive tons of messages from admirers, but I'd love to hear back from you. having problems leaving this under my username - zamm. zipzap0506@yahoo.com

Konbanwa, Yamaterasu-San. Beautiful story. Please choose another holiday, and write a sequal.

It's very refreshing to see a story set in Japan where the female lead has depth and doesn't fit into the usual stereotypes. Any chance you'll write more eventually?

if hadn't found wonderful life partner few years ago would be tempted to look now.

Thanks for story