by goddessinjapan
I like it - the author has a nice grasp of Japanese ways and culture.
Wonderful beginning but now you have left me wanting more....please continue the tale
Perhaps this story will develop into something that is erotic...in an Asian sort of way? It is far too "right" to be very erotic in the American way.
You've set the stage for a potential fascinating mini-series. Lovely detail here about Asian cultures. Excellent!!
I really would like to know more about these characters, so please continue on with the story. You've gotten me to care, and I don't want to have to finish this in my head, because I know you'll do it better.
Those personally, I like the romantic aspect of it alot, so I want to see it more from that than the mindless harcore sex side, but what ever you feel is best, either way, please write more about them.
I loved this story - it took me back to my "second" home. Extremely well-written and engaging. However, I too wanted more! Please finish!?! Perhaps it can be a serial...
very promising! is she going to teach Mathew how to pleasure her body with his fingers, his tongue, his...
What a lovely tale. Were you planning on continuing it? I thought it was very well written. You have talent.
I loved the story, and look forward to additional chapters.
JIM C