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Rumple Foreskinover 19 years agoA well constructed story.
A nice story of two very busy people in love. As kbate mentioned, the ending could have been stronger, but endings give most writers fits. Keep up the good work.
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kbateover 19 years agoabrupt finish
Good story, but I thought the ending was a touch abrupt. Well written.
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