All Comments on 'Wolf Trap Ch. 01'

Well i must say that it was one well written and well thought out piece! i do like the ending and the center!..

can't wait to see more!

Wonderful begining - would love to see more! Not quite 100% but definately better than 75%. Please write more.

pretty abruptly...

I had to read it a couple of times to finally clue in. But I am really looking forward to a continuing storyline, like adjusting to life at home or encountering the slut again. Thanks

I was a little confused too. Werewolves can only change to human form during a full moon really? Hmmm guess I learn something new everyday. But anyhow, I think it could have used more detail at the end, I felt like I was hanging. Does he realize she's a werewolf? Nice descriptions of her costume and the sex ;)

Good luck with the contest!

Ali

I nearly lost my bladder <grin> tantalizing, mystique and erotic tale matadore. tail waggin' good tail <smile>

good luck and happy halloween

As a matter of fact, the greater part of this story was the sex description. Perhaps a bit more information before and after would have provided better balance.

Left me slightly confused at the end until I remembered that wolfweres can only change to human form during a full moon.

A very nice romance indeed!