by logophile
This is the best erotic story I've read in months. Not rock hard dicks & pulsating cunts, but two people exploring each other, loking what they found, with problems and all the baggage life brings. Kudos!
Lance_Aural
You know how I feel about this story. Artistic flair in every word. Thank you for allowing me to read, pre-submit. Awesome job, luscious.
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The flow was so natural. The exploration of two people wanting yet with a reality check. Beautifully done!
My god, honey, you get more intense with every story you write! This is a quiet barn-burner...the emotions these two share are so powerfully presented, they make me feel like a shell of a person! This is why I'm such a fan of yours!
What a delicious story! I thank you from the depths of my ... um, soul ... yeah, that's it. :D
~ Imp
Great read, Logo. You done did good. Nice pacing, good characters and hot sex. What more could a reader want, except maybe to be there?
Rumple
Very good story ... I'm not often compelled to 5 bomb a story.. but I was compelled!!!!
You did a very good job with this one. The plot was good, the pacing nice and it all felt perfect for Valentine's Day. Great work!
/LP
You have improved as you do this more, haven't you? I like your voice here, chatty, trying to be clear, busy, living in your head. A cozy person to hear a story from. You have the handle, I think. Take this as seriously as you do some other things; keep writing. Because now, you can really get better at it. Lots of solid detail to anchor the vignettes, and a sure hand with comedy-of-manners, something the younger writers can only envy.
A wonderful story! I love how you added the old women and everything. Not just sex, but enough to be arousing. Very good work.
I would LOVE to see a second one.
Wonderful tender love story, well written and well thought out. Thank you for sharing it with us.