by oggbashan
Excellent story Oggs!!!!!! I loved it. You told the truth in a way no way has done. Keep up the good work and look forward to reading more of your work.
as has been said by others. Short but good. Ar first, I thought there might have been too much description of the costumes, but then I realized it was part of the story, and necessary. The sex part was not at all erotic.
Your story was very creepy. I think maybe a bit more detail of the people woulda been nice. At least for me. But even with the shortness it was an excellent Halloween story. Good job :) And Good luck with the contest!
Another fine work by one of the best.
What else could I say?
A good length, humorous, macabre, too bad you don't qualify to win the contest this time!
This was awesome! Fantastic idea, beautifully executed (if you will pardon the pun :) Bravo!
That was a fast, fun read, Og. Good job with the setting. Whatever the couple had for supper should become number one of the "avoid" list.
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