by only_more_so
You need to continue this and get Bill and Tina involved in the next chapter.
I loved it!! What a nice, beautiful way to spend a Christmas Eve! Keep writing!!
Wonderful, delightful, pleasing, and other similar adjectives come to mind. As do hot, sweet and tender.
This is the second story of yours I've read, I love the dreamy quality you have given them. Will read more.
Thankyou!
An enjoyable tale with a great twist. Looking forward to the sequel!
This was one of the better stories I've read. There were a few words mistyped, but the story was both interesting and excitingly erotic. I wish that would happen to me.
A very nicely written holiday jewel. It holds the promise of continuation for a great Christmas story. I look forward to the next installment. I hope you continue to develope the relationship of the first 3 characters, and infuse Tina and Bill into the storyline. Once again a very good piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us...