All Comments on 'Weight Room Christmas'

by mtnman2003

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It was hot, but

I was disheartened by lack of enviormental detail. This story could have been any season. It seemed like you just threw in a date for the Xmas submission. Also, i didn't know what the characters looked like, just their bodies. Good luck to you anyways.

Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
a new way to lose weight

now why havent I thought of that? I liked the story...the sex...the steamy, steamy sex...

You so good at writing sex scenes...do you think these up all day long???

Good luck in the contest

~Honey

sacksackover 18 years ago
tremendous sex scenes.....

But it would have been nice to have more detail of EVERYTHING, not just their sex parts. Good luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Bod of Adonis.... but stupid.

Just because a woman doesn't pay attention, doesn't mean she's a bitch. YOU are not the center of the universe, no matter how much you think you are.

Lousy ass wish fulfilment story.

Sorry chump, better luck next time.

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