All Comments on 'Visiting Big Sis'

White-hot erotica. I was left breathless...

maximum hot!!! very well written, excellent pacing and hot, hot, hot!

Very well written. Hope to see more stories from you.

couldnt have been more fun. enjoyed the room mate joining in on the fun....yummy!

Kudos, on a job well done.

v~

Damn Dolly. *deep breath* That was really good. The characters and story line are there too. The sex is hot, but it helps when an author can have the back ground to support it.

Very well done.

*hugs*

Can' wait to see what happens tomorrow! The premise and pace left you wanting more. Well done!!

You make me wish I had a sister to visit! ;) Very hot and very well done!

That story was hott! You've got me OVERHEATED. I hope to see more stories from you soon.

a really hot story........made me real.........well you know.....keep the stories cumming

excellent job

Good story, nice language *wink*

The "good girls gone bad" side was intensely erotic!

dtm50

Hi

That was a terrific story. I read only lesbian stories, and if they have any sadism in them I stop reading immediately. (There's enough bad stuff in the real world, so I prefer not to have it in fiction.) I wish you the best in everything, particularly your love life.

bravo girlfriend, you can lick my pussy anytime. Great tale, skillfully told. Wet panties just remembering it.

What a nice evening meal to be had inside on such a cold snowy night. Good job.

I think that this is one of the greatest stories of passion and lust (and sheer sex) I have ever read, and in my opinion, I think that you should become a proffesional writer and get some work published! You'd be rich!

That was probably the best story I have ever read. Truly outstanging. Thank you!

I just spent *hours* over the course of two days trying to find this story again—I couldn't get it out of my brain. Now I have it permanently bookmarked, and I know I want to see more and more from you. One of the best three-way dynamics I've ever seen. More lesbian sex!

Just thinking of the scenario was enough to get me off. Excellent story and just totally lust crazed sex!

wow.. that got me so hot, i felt so turned on reading about the unbridled love between amy and her sister. forbidden love (only if its consentual) is so sexy.

you're an amazing writer, you got just the right balance between keeping the suspence [ without going off plot], creating a sensual atmosphere and making the storyline and language so sexy and intense. definately keep writing hun_ hope to read some more stuff from you china-doll x

super, super hot. fantastic stuff.

I came with the girls in your story. Very hot.

i was rubbing my clit and fingering myself the whole time. that was so sexy.

Wish the scale went higher than just five! I came along with the three girls @ the end. I agree with the person who suggested that you get some of your stuff into print! You defin8ky have a LOT of talent writing. Especially this piece (LOL) of Erotica. WOW Keep 'em coming (LOL)

:P

I got of on it because it is well presented, but we all know that sex between girls includes a lot of ass play: licking, tongue probing kissing the rosebud and more. I WOULD'VE RATE 100% BUT.....BD13

THANK YOU.

loved it so much it left me worn out

Mmm! Your story kept my fingers in my panties the entire time, and took me to a powerful orgasm at the end along with the three characters. Wonderfully hot.

I felt it was agreat story. the first third of the story had great detail. It kept me hard the entire time. I love Boston. Thanks

A well written story. Great descriptive writing

Great work china-doll.

Your work made me wash my panties a few days earlier, for that's all I wear at home.

Great story. Beautifully written. Would send anyone over the edge again and again.

This is the best story of women making love that I can remember reading..

Very HOT!!!

I don't often comment on stories, but this time I had to. Amazing, simply awesome!

Seriously sexy. I don't know what's hotting the lesbians or the incest.

One of THE best stories I've read in a long time. Way to go. Superb discription of ladies making love to each other. I feel like I was there as did my flaming pussy.

Uuuugh, I simply loved it and it was exquisitely written! Please keep making these stories. :) My clit was so wet!

Any chance of a sequel? PLEASE!! :-)

My sister and I have been fucking each other for awhile; can't wait until tomorrow when our tongues will be buried in each other's pussy.

5,5,5,5,5,5,5,5,+

This was a really fun story. I don't read many on here, but every once in a while I find something that makes me smile. Thanks.

Only Asain whores shave their pussies.

Only Asian porn stars shave their pussy.

Quite the most arousing story I have read in a good while.

It was a good story but you need to fire your editors.

1. The word you constantly misused was sent (should have been scent)

2. All together should have been altogether

3. Kelly's brown, almost black hair became simply black

4. Kelly, from across the hall, somehow became Wendy's roommate

That is a unfinished work. I'm not sure what score to give it. 😘 liked what I although truly believe there is more unfinished, business between sisters. Feelings they need talk about not avoid because if either of them chooses not deal with their emotions towards the other. It's liable to damage there fragile love for one another.

I'm being charitable 5🌟😍 Write us another chapter.

Really enjoyed it... Would love to hear more of their story...

holy hell, that was one of the sexiest stories I've read on literotica and I've read a LOT. I thought the story was going in the sister/sister direction for sure so it took me by surprise when the roommate joined in. that was incredibly hot!! I was very hard and had to force myself to not cave in to my climax. thankfully, I waited til the end of the story and once I did, i stroked myself into submission and it was AMAZING! thank you for writing such an erotic story. I gave it 5 stars, bookmarked it, and labelled it one of my favorite stories. thanks again

Very yummy indeed! Thank you!

very nice from shy to sex maniac in minutes time way to go!

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So hot..my shorts are soaked, and my fingers glistening..this was by far one of the hottest stories on here..love it and more please..