All Comments on 'Up Up & Away For Valentine's Day'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Fantastic

Hot, sexy and fantastic story!

staggerleestaggerleeover 19 years ago
Excellent

Can't wait for my next balloon ride. Come on springtime. Excellent story and very hot.

kbatekbateover 19 years ago
Nice Story

It had a few technical problems, and a few run-on lines but I really liked the plot, the characters and the style.

I went ahead and dropped a 5 bomb... so good luck!

eric shawn listoeric shawn listoover 19 years ago
Up and up and up and up...

Great idea! the sex was so sizzling hot! Loved it! great job dp!

elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisqueover 19 years ago
Cold air, hot sex.

Nice idea and some good twists. Seemed more serially monogamous than group sex at times.

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
No wonder ...

... you like my balloon AV! Very nice work, DP. ~Imp

cookiejarcookiejarover 19 years ago
Hot-hot-hot

Too bad I'm scared of heights. lol But the sex part was a definite yes. Good luck!

logophilelogophileover 19 years ago
Up up and away

Sweet! Nice romance, nice characters, nice group sex! Well done! Now my question is, do you really have a balloon? I've always wanted a ride.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 19 years ago
Sounds like a fun way to get it up.

Good job of working the balloon ride aspects into the storyline. Could have used a little more editing, but still a fun read.

Rumple Foreskin

English LadyEnglish Ladyover 19 years ago
Hot,and not just hot air!

sexy, believeable and hot. Fantastic!

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