All Comments on 'Unexpected Gifts'

I thought this story was one of the best I've read in a long time. It kept you wondering what was going to happen next. It was extremely well written.

Extremely well written, and a great premise with perfect execution, but goddamn, the ending gave me whiplash. LoL A softer or more complete ending would have guaranteed you a top finish, imo; far too many dangling plot questions. Good luck, all the same.

It was very hot... really had me going! But, it felt unfinished, and ended too ubruptly. So much potential though, I can't wait to read more! I love mystery, romance, passion, and sex of course! Thanks!