by WFEATHER
It was a good story. Twins very much in love. Going the slave route just doesn't work. See ya!
I guess I am just not into the slave thing either. Sorry, the story did nothing for me.
The brother/sister thing was unnecessary but the story was good. I'm not opposed to incest, but it needs to play a significant part in the action of the story. They need to be somewhere only siblings can be, around other family, etc.don't get me wrong, I did like the story.
The digital camera could be used to expand the story. Publishing their "forbidden love" on the internet, possibly being found out by close friends or even Mom or Dad maybe? Ah, the reprecussions! Their "secret" needs to be exposed in some very tittlating fashion. And...the BDSM aspect doesn't bother me at all. please feel free to...continue.
IT should by a love day everywhere. Not to neglect your family that you have not call, cared about, e-mailed, sent card or gift to. not hugged nor kissed ... care and remember you family... can money buy love ?????