All Comments on 'Trickling Effect'

Too confusing to enjoy and rate. This year, that year. His POV, her POV, I've got whiplash. When in his POV, I'm confused about which woman is doing what. Pity with a better writing style, this story could have been quite good. Please keep writing. Read other stories--see and learn how to do it.

the story was good. very much a romance. and realistic.

thank you.

I don’t understand the first posted comment, as this story was very clear and flowed so well.

It was so real to life it hurt. In long-term love you obviously grow closer but you become the truest of friends and soon there is nothing you wouldn’t do to make the other happy. Oh yeah, the ups and downs can be as rough as this and even more hurtful.

Life is a bitch but for two people who survive and grow each other it is worth every agonizing and euphoric moment. God, life would be dull without people trying to make their love work, as it does feel so great when it works. Nothing like looking at each other and knowing just what the other is thinking and you both smile.

Thank you for great writing and such a wonderful Romance and Loving Wives story.

DC:

A really great story of the weals and woes of life. Well done. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Loved the story - and what's wrong with exploring his and her POV. A sweet tender Romance...that's my POV! Waiting for your next one DR.

duddle

cheating story and abject mental illness more likely....