All Comments on 'Trick or Tryst'

Looks good.

Falling

I liked reading it, the development of things surprised me...

good luck in the contest!

Fussionee. (Abs and Vana)

Very enjoyable read with lots of scary situations. Kierlhyn dream turns to a nightmare. Terrific Read.

Good luck in the Contest

Well-written, and a perfect time for using third-person limited.

Very much so. Good luck in the contest.

but still, a valiant effort and I wish you the very best of luck. I think you are a strong original voice and hope you will continue to hone your considerably developed craft in future stories.

Excellent work, and good luck in the contest!

Hot enough to win? Hard to say, but I enjoyed it and thought it had sufficient horror/scary elements to be a contender.

This was very imaginative! I enjoyed it, good luck in the contest!

A fine example of swords and sorcery, with a bit of old J.R.R. thrown in. An exciting read. Good luck in the contest.

I was surprised at every turn. You led me on, keeping me in suspense to the very end. Well done, my friend, and good luck in the contest.