All Comments on 'Trick or Treat'

This would have a bit stronger connection to the Halloween theme. Basically, he has sex with a total stranger, which could happen any day. The fact that it happened on Halloween did nothing to change the sex in any way, except smudge her freckles. I hope my point comes through here.

Dumb ass it was his wife...read that last paragraph! Excellent story!!

Awwww this was so sweet... I LOVE that last line... gives away so much :) Good luck in the contest!

Loved it

In the space of time that it took for him to get a beer, (in other words, a few seconds) she would have to get into a car, get out of a car, slam the door, put on a trenchcoat, get rid of all the props, and walk back. I do see now that freckles are mentioned on the costume of the first woman. And the car would have to be in the driveway during the whole episode, there wouldn't have been time to drive it around. Which meant that he knew that it was his wife all along, and that the whole thing was "planned." That ruins the story for me, as the only thing that might have been interesting about it was that she was able to fool him. IF I have the right interpretation now (I'm still not sure), this type of thing has been done elsewhere before to better effect, usually it's a story about mixed costumes at a masquerade party....hohum.

Alright - so I'm confused - I still enjoyed the heck out of this story. Now THIS is a Halloween story!

Good luck with the Contest!

What a Halloween!

Boyd

Great story :) love anything with a cheerleader twist, this one was particually good!

Well some people might not agree but I think that every man wishes some hot chick would come to his house and have sex with him. And if it was planned it was still a bit daring because the door was open the whole time. I loved it.

Dear JimPet,

What can I say? They say there are no new stories under the sun, that everything's been done. Well, that may be true, but I'm a firm believer in the way the story's told and not the story itself.

Also, when writing erotic fiction, the 'Arousal Factor' is vital, and the AF of 'Trick or Treat' is a '10'!

Keep up the good work, I hope to see more of you work 'cumming' my way.

Best wishes,

LordJames

Good luck in the contest

Abs & Vana

Really enjoyed your story :-)

awesome job left me wet and wanting more

Absolutely loved it. Very hot, and engaging. I was lost in no time.