All Comments on 'Travieso Returns'

by Salvor-Hardon

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sacksackover 17 years ago
super!

great details and I hope to see more of your work soon!

Unsung MuseUnsung Museover 17 years ago
I Know What I Want For Xmas : )

Yeah! Travieso is BACK!!!

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 17 years ago
For someone 150, he looks great

Interesting and original. A few spots may need smoothing out, but the plot does a good job of building interest.

Rumple

SaucyminxSaucyminxover 17 years ago
not only a great sadist

But a great writer to boot (or two boots and a leather dress in this case.) Loved it Sal my sweet.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 17 years ago
Great sequel!

I wondered if Travieso would return this holiday season! :) You didn't disappoint, Sal... I think I even like him more as time goes on! *grin* Good luck in the contest :)

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
Travieso returns...

from pole dancing <grin to a cute twist at the end via e-mail... I enjoyed your write (~_~) good luck and merry christmas

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hot sex, an intriguing concept, and a happy ending

No wonder I smit you and your writing.

Jammikins

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Job!

Loved part two, an ending for the couple.

Anonymous
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