All Comments on 'Too Smart'

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Strange Affair!

This story gives new meaning to the term creepy. Pam is hot to betray her husband, but ends up encountering a vampire who seduces her as he has a little snack while nibbling on her neck. A Great Halloween Entry.

Good luck in the Contest!

sacksackover 17 years ago
not at all predictable...

and kept me guessing! Good luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
that was so hot !

i think i am feeling a little faint meself ...

Maharat

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I am wondering too

Why did this happen ? She didn't seem to want it or need it, And neither did he. There would be less of a story, and maybe further chapters wl explain both of their motivations. But I can't understand him allowing his wife to be gsng banged twice, when he could have stopped it.. And staying with her.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...