All Comments on 'There's a First Time for Everything'

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BelegonBelegonover 18 years ago
I like the detail...

...of the bells on the anklet and the coins of the fringe, adding to her dance...the urgency at the end as he plays possum and then retakes command...good luck in the contest...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
WONDERFUL!!

Absolutely wonderful!

So aptly worded without any words that could be deemed vulgar!

A very welcomed change to the world of erotica, causing our minds to do the work!

Thank you!

sacksackabout 18 years ago
great work....

very intense and full of fascinating details! Good luck in the contest!

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