All Comments on 'The Wreck'

PLEASE DO A SEQUEL .

A very good story.

Intriguing and well written. All that one expects from one of your stories, Colly. You just keep getting better.

Such a rich story. With some unexpected twists.

The characters, as always, were well done. Richly textured and very full.

It also gave a nice glimpse of a world few people are able to see.

Well done.

The detailed and descripitive writing made the underwater explorations exciting at the same time adding erotiscm to the interracial love scenes.

Colleen,

I loved the story. I hope that you are going to continue on with it. Would love to hear how they go as far as finding the wreck.

Colleen, did it not end up too abruptly?

Wow, a new setting in the outdoors, this is great. The sex is also great. You had built up the Viv character so right. How about putting her in a new locale like in the African bush or where ever, just write more on this genre.

-I started the story by literally being absorbed by it, into it, and than somehow recognizing the style: I've previously read "The Furies" and couldn't stop until I finished it;

-The research for this story yielded an amazing amount of details, seen every step of the way, making everything beyond believable (but also making understanding the terms a little difficult: I didin't know the acronyms);

-Needless to say the sex was great; the build-up until the sex scenes was great, too, making everything more realistic.

-I've previously read very interesting and educational "How To..." articles written by you;

-In my comment to "The Furies" I suggested that you should (be) publish(ed) in mainstream literature; all that you have already written could use just a little -well, sadly- censorship of the sex scenes to be accesible to larger audiences;

=All of the above make me think that YOU ALREADY HAVE BEEN PUBLISHED and the literotica pen name is just to conceal the identity of some huge mainstream writer (I love conspiracies, I must say).

Anyway, you have written this story at the same level of excellence I have grown accustomed to :) ;)

Keep up the good work !!!

Excuse me for asking, but are you David Weber or Mrs Sharon Weber ?!? (Of course I don't expect a public answer; maybe not even a private one)

But this line had me smiling:

"...Burt operated the wench on the surface..."

(And I'm sure she enjoyed it, but...)

I think maybe you meant:

"...Burt operated the winch on the surface..."?

Too bad Colleen no longer writes stories here. She is sorely missed.

why is she not writing here anymore?

Colleen died

sigh. Collen Thomas died in a car accident several years ago.

R.I.P. Colleen. Thanks guys, now I won't look like an idiot or a jerk asking for more. Phew!! *relieved*

This is not a dresses up "wham bam thank you mam" kind of story. It is intelligent, historically based, albeit fictional, with action and yes sex. The characters are as well developed as the storyline. You get a sense of who they are and for me, I even pictured what they look like.

I truly hope the author make it a series, or even better, a book. It's just that good.

I just received an anonymous post stating the author, Colleen Thomas has "unfortunately passed on." I was unaware of this. My condolences to her family, friends, and fans of her work, which I am proud to say, I am now one of them. What a gifted and talented woman. I am so grateful, her memory and her life lives on, every time we read her work.

Very well written story, with a nice twist near the finish.

And it wasn't just how Viv discovered that sex could be far better than she ever imagined, but finding love as well.

A well earned 5 Stars, and my gratitude.

Very good diving as well as sexual exploration. The author's tragedy is unfortunate but her talent will live on through her writing.

She could have us fooled? A talented male writer disguised as CT? Hmm never know do we?

Yes, I'd say a man who knows his diving, wouldn't you?

Good story (although we learn more about diving than is strictly relevant) and Calizza is a fabulous sexy character.

Another classic from this great author, shame not here anymore. Only hope she can read the comments and know her work is still appreciated.

I kind of got wrapped up in the treasure hunting story line. The relationship became secondary in my mind even as hot as it was. IMHO the story could have had a few more chapters but that is only b/c I was so into the story. I loved it and will probably read it again. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Thanks For sharing.

Ooooo Kkkkkkk night diving to clear the head ….. ok it wouldn’t really become an eye catcher then i shit my pants diving at night in the middle of an ocean ….. so the crew was lucky for Vivs dive ….. clever girl sawing some holes into the body, 👍 fabulous idea and for sure even tough pirates never thought about such ….. great idea and marvelous tale

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