by j3zza
As i was reading i had to stop and put on my panties and start playing with myself .. i dream of having a pussy so i could feel a hard big cock in meeeeeeeee :) keep the story going it;s good
well, you said it is part of a long story?
I can't wait to read the rest of it then!
It was seriously hot!
A little predictable, but I really liked it. Look forward to seeing where it goes next.
to tell if the story is good or not, but your writing is admirable, and really hot. I cum all over my pants while reading it. Hope the rest is just as good as it is, and it would surely be a masterpiece.
But the injected "note" to the reader was jarring. It may sound ok in your head, but for others it's a nasty distraction. Besides, it's completely unnecessary.
I really enjoyed this story! Thank you for the great Sci Fi angle.
predictable monster SciFi with role reversal