All Comments on 'The Talent Show'

get an original concept. This is nothing but changing names and a retaling of the Little Rascals episode. oh and having the mom get naked instead of in her underskirt.

Should have been in Humor category.

LOL

IF THIS ISN'T PLAGARISM I DON'T KNOW WHAT IT ISN'T. I THOUGHT SOMETHING INVOLVING A KID'S SHOW FROM THE 30'S WOULD BE A VERY BLANTANT FACT OF PLAGARISM.

not all of us were around in the '30's and this is a hot story

This was a great story and I am hoping for another chapter.

Well, it needs a little work, but it was well worth the read; Truth be known, it falls into a category not easily defined. A lot of us have a sexual fantasy connected to that Little Rascals episode, "Beginner's Luck," and quite a few of us have worked up scenario's based on that episode! I guess it's a sort of fetish, not easily understood by some people. I've written stories based on it myself. Thanks for sharing your story. For those of us in this reclusive club, your ending is priceless. I rated it five stars just for having the the courage to publish it! I wish more stories followed this theme as closely as your does. I'd really like to see more of your stories in the future, and perhaps stories by other members who can appreciate why we find this whole concept so stimulating.

jparker2 is an excellet erotic story-teller.