All Comments on 'The Spawning - Chapter 1'

you have to write more i need more

Very creative start. You are a talented writer with an understanding of the unspeakable pleasures we subconciously seek. I hope you continue to massage those deviancies that sliver in our heads.

The story telling was really good, you write well but the story itself was dissappointing and not what I expected.

I thought too much of it bad taste

I like it. :) Now let's see what's happening next. :)

I like it so far! I cannot wait for the next chapter