All Comments on 'The Solitary Arrow Ch. 18'

I only wish that you could write faster so I wouldn't have to wait so long before reading more.

it is a great fantasy story...keep up the excellent work

I sure am glad you wright fast. This last chapter (18) is a good clif hanger. I really like to know what will happen next.

Ijust knew the cavalry would stay loyal,and now Harlan(known in our world as John Wayne)is son his way.I am listening even more keenly for that bugle call.Iwould volunteer myself,but it is too far to ride from here.Excellent story again.

You know the comment is to give you feed back but I have to say that the other most recent comments pretty much cover it all. Well done and please keep writing

You can't stop now!!!! It's just getting interesting!!!

Please finish it, the suspense will kill me!!!

I couldn't stop reading it...

Wow! Another series to keep me hooked. Excellent writing.

Also.. where did i miss Wendy's enterence? She's written like we've seen her before but i guess i must have missed that part. :-(

As I said before i love this series, I check every day for a new chapter both here and at ASSTR, Wendy was introduced in chapter 14.

Very good work of fiction even by comparison to the novels available now. You should consider writing this in earnest, as a straightforward work of fantasy, I'd certainly buy it. The work seems to have a life of its own. Looking forward for more to come. Good job!

It would be nice if you'd write more here on lit... whether uncomforatable or not, with sexual innotations or not, the general reader loves a good story. You be good, way good, almost too good so I got a proposition. Send another story and revelations may be forthcoming...

ahhh this story is soo good, thank you for this, it has quickly become one of my favourite series.