All Comments on 'The Show Ch. 01'

My god that was amazing. not only is the idea fresh and original but it included nearly every one of my fav celebs. id be eager to help you tihnk of other ways to encorporate any other celebs into it. Bravo cant wait for the next one. Faye x x x x

I agree, great idea. And you wrote very very well, alot of times good ideas end up being let downs because of bad or rushed writing. You're doing good so far. The possibilities seem almost endless here. Great idea for a series. Can't wait to read more. Keep it up!

That was by far the best story opener on this site. Not too slow, not too fast, and a promise of more exciting adventures to come. All my favorite celebs, except Cathrine Bell, the chick from JAG. Other than that, A+ man.

Great work, but why no allyson hannigan if you are going to have the rest of the buffy cast?

this is the first time ive posted a comment, but i had to because that story was amazing. dont stop with it, give us more!

Great story man.you defanitly need to continue this story.

You have to keep the story going. Brilliant two balls up

I haven't seen anything of this caliber regarding Celebrities since WhisperStory stopped writing The Bit Time...keep up the good work!

that was the best thing that i have read in a long time, some stories just drag it out to make it look good before you read it, so i am usually skeptical about reading long stories if they are going to suck. your story, however, just ass raped all of the competition, in a good way. loved it, hope to see mucho more chapters on this bitchin topic!

Loved the first chapter, musicankane, please continue! A wonderful piece of erotica, and a new twist on the Truman Show concept that I thought was a masterstroke! Go go GO!!! :)

This is one of the most original stories that I have come across on this web site since I found it over a year and half ago. I noticed that there are several more chapters after this one I hope they are just as good.

This would have to be one of your better series dude. Keep up the great work