All Comments on 'The Short List'

I like the way you made it all seem like it could really happen. So many group sex stories are so far-fetched - do real people act like that? This one I can just about picture myself in. Thanks!

I'm a writer not a reader. Normally I won't even start a story with more than two pages. This story kept me hard through all three wonderfully written pages! Now, like the four in the story, I need to finish too. :)

Rich

couldnt keep my hand off my cock.

At first I was annoyed at the grammatical errors in the first couple of paragraphs and thought that it would be a sign of a poor story. But I persisted. Wow! Glad I did, that was a great story that escalated a situation realistically and had me somewhat damp in my chair. Thanks

This was one of the most realistic and hottest stories ever. I would swear it was autobiographical...

Normally stories bore me after a few paragraphs on here, and I end up "skim" reading them, even the good ones. but I enjoyed yours so much and it is the first story I have read completly. Please write more!!

yes, my first reaction was in spanish.

the story is just great! the plot, characters, set and timing are just excellent, close to perfect, grammar needs some finetuning but is OK, it actually makes everything a bit more realistic and closer to the readers...

sinceras felicitaciones!!

how about letting us know how things went from then on for everyone in the story? particularly, for Cheryl & Ian... whole new relationship, i guess.

Not the best storyline I've ever read, nor was it the best written. Yet, I have to say that reading this has made me more horny than almost every other story I've ever read. Thanks!