All Comments on 'The Shave'

That has to be the longest story i've read on here - not that i'm complaining!

usually i don't make it past the 2nd page of something this long, but this was SO hot and so well written, i couldn't stop.

i'll be reading your other stuff...

Damn!!!!

Damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Did I say it before,

DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was the hottest story I've ever read, I need to go back and read the rest of your stuff. I saw how long it was and thought I would just read the first page and see how it sounded. I was ready to bug out, but Damn.... You hooked me and I read the whole godamn thing!

You are right, it's a long sucker, but the best story I've ever read.

Thanks

What a story!!! I couldn't wait to get to the next page. Well written and thought out before hand. Will read yor previous submissions. Thank you.

This is one hot fucking story. I enjoyed it very much keep up the hot stories. Maybe you could post another photo some day.

Missed your stories and am glad you have returned to my screen, to my fantasies.

this made me really horny, want mooore ...

What a realistic story that makes you feel you are right there! Unlike a lot of stories in Literotica, this one is so real, it has to be true! While reading this I found myself wondering how much of this is made up and how much is true. By the end of the story, I was not only hot, I felt that I had somehow been given the keys to how this woman really thinks and it made the story all that more powerful! I heartily reccomend this to anyone, male or female, that wants to get a real sexual rush!

That was so hot. I've had a fantastic morning envisaging it all. thank you. Hope you haven't run out of adventures to tell us about

Good God...that's all I can say! I'm also an exhibitionist, though to a lesser degree, and this story turned me on SO MUCH!!! Girl, you rock!

Like someone else said, I hardly read past the second page. However, I just couldn't stop reading. One of the best subs on Literotica.

great story with lots of fun and games but i like happy endings...too bad this one did not have one..off topic...your intro...loved it and if any man opens his mouth to complain when a woman takes off her clothes for him he does not deserve her...lots of critics in the locker room but i wonder what any woman would see in any of them.

Jenn you are fantastic couldn't help but whack off to it a couple of times keep up the good work

Jenn, This story is absolutely great! Even though it is long (took me three work days to get through it) it is incredible.

Your descriptions of the sexual encounters makes me feel as if I were there too. How long ago did this happen? Any chance you'll be visiting my area anytime soon? LOL

I truly loved your story. I was wet and hot myself reading it.

I have the biggest hardon right now and need some relief from this story!!! Great!!

OMG Girl you so Rock to bad for dip shit ((( LOL NOT )))

good job Jenn

hey how about putting on a webcam show for us FANS ?!?!?!

J_N_J229@yahoo.com if you do a show for the fans Please besureto drop me a line and let me know WHEN ~*Grinz*~

good story line, well written, very erotic

Jenno, I love your stories

OMG!!!

hottest part - shaving - i doubt you've ever gone back... ;-)

Unbelievable. You totally rock. And you write one great story (make that many great stories). Please continue. You are still young.

Sorry I havent read your stories yet but just had to say that i just love your nipples! and the rest of you is just gorgeous.

This has to be one of the hottest stories on here. The pictures on Flickr that go with it are even hotter.

This is probably the longest story I've ever read on Lit. It took up a good part of my Saturday night. But it was worth every page . . . every word. You're a great storyteller, Jen.

I liked "I superglued it to his computer screen and left."

hot and humorous ending! fuck yeah!

fucking hell i read that with my mum and brother in the room and got SO turned on that i was rubbing myself through my skirt

fucking love u jen

Jennifer, I love how you tell it like sharing it with your closest girlfriend, and pointing out that this guy had everything and was dumb enough to want more just adds to the revenge factor. I am sure it should be equally entertaining to both men and women. Keep writing!

great hot sexy story jen ... just like you !!

ive nearly read all of them now and i still havnt managed to get to the end of a story without coming...keep it up babe

Thanks Jenno, it has been a while but I loved this story. Great pace, a twist, fantastic sex simply a great read.

Your development and pacing are outstanding. The way you describe the various scenes is incredible. You're one of the best authors on this site!

hot as fuck...thankyou

I have now read all your stories they really tick all of the boxes erotica at it's best. I just love your "slut" character that comes out to play

And I'm usually hard to impress since I'm a writer myself. You're definitely one of a few writers in my favorite list.

I have spent more time than I would like to admit searching for erotic stories with that perfect balance of raw, wild sexuality and the ring of truth. All of yours are masterful. Thank you and please keep writing!

My God girl. You are either the most fervently freaky fantasy female or the most adventurous sexy lady in existence and a great writer of erotic literature. . This is the consummate erotic story. I'm going to read the remainder of your posted work and wonder if there is a chronological order to them, either by date posted or by topic. Thanks for you gift.

WOW!!! That's HOT. If that's "mostly" true, like you said, you are one incredibly hot little lady! Wish I could find your chatroom. I'd be hard for a month!!!!

You are a superb story teller and you are the perfect person to deliver what you write. Your thoughts create your words/story and are connected to me in my mind, which, in turn, stimulates reactions from my body - I hope this is the effect you want.. You enjoy the things that you write about and we love the same things........I get into your stories envisioning you. You, as the writer, are the perfect exhibitionist and I, as the reader, am the prefect admiring voyeur. An Irish/Italian combo is superb and reminds me of my past youth in Boston. Petite, small breasted ladies with protuberant, enticingly suckable nipples are my favorites. Clean-shaved - you bet and unbeatable for my feasting on you to orgasm with my tongue, As one who likes a MFM situation and seeing and feeling the accompanying activities of you being simultaneously worshiped by two men definitely floats my boat; one cock is wonderful and two are twice as nice - all for you. You describe yourself as a woman who really gets into and goes convulsively over-the-top with her wanton and uninhibited orgasms and that is a major turn-on. You are someone who appreciates getting into altered states of consciousness through various substances and that is also a plus - connection on another mind level. Oh yes, through your writing, I envision you as someone who is cum-ravenous, fueled by an insatiable unleashed desire, with the intent of sensuously and hungrily bringing me off explosively in your mouth - how you do it is one thing, but it is the coordination of the intensity of your passion in doing it, loving your ability (ego boost) to please and being loved in return for it, You can feel it, by my shortness of breath, the undulations of my stomach muscles, the swelling of my cock head throbbing against your coaxing/demanding tongue, feeling the pulsations of my cock beginning, joyously feeling and tasting a further slick stream of pre-cum as it anoints your tongue, paving the way for what you want most, hearing my moaning morph into a groan of final ecstasy, my balls shifting in your caressing hand as your bobbing mouth, licking tongue, and sensuous suction will me into submission - no place where I'd rather be - the precursors of suck-cess, my head reels in divine delirium and I explode all of the essence of my being, created in my balls and infused with my soul - everything gratefully given and shared with you and for you. You love and thrill to the intimacy of knowing me in one more way as you moan in the gratitude of conquest and sharing, consciously and lasciviously tasting each and every creamy spurt of ejaculate, one after the next, after the next, They coat and saturate your tongue and each and every sperm, swimming in its river of jism kisses your taste buds and dies in nirvana. You want to remember this moment. Your mouth is full, to the point of overflowing. Your licks and sucks have pulled everything from within me and your tongue and mouth continue to bathe my cock in its own juices combined with your saliva. The sensations are too great and I must withdraw. Our eyes lock - do we see gratitude, joy, satisfaction, lust, or love? - and you swallow everything in two gulps, You have consumed me and I am now part of you. The welcome (well cum) has been exquisite and at this moment I could die a happy man.

Jennifer's best story.