by MayhemLass
Finn's passion prevailed in the storm <grin An intriguing tale. I like 'seals' too (~_~) Thanks for an erotic read and good luck... Happy Nude Day!
say that i have always felt an affinity for the selkie myth, and have longed to capture the skin of a selkie so that i could completely possessed her. now with that sead, your story is excellent, the fullness of setting, mood and character, leaves one feeling and tasting the sea and rain, and urgency ,of the selkie,and Finn. your story reads very naturaly, one event flows smoothly into the next. As aways a very well written and thought out story. good luck.
Congratulations of a good piced of writing. The end was a bit flat, IMHO, but otherwise the story was a good read that could do well in the contest.
(I have no idea what happened on my first PC)
Congratulations on some fine writing. The ending was a bit flat, IMHO, but otherwise the story was a good read that could do well in the contest.
Fumble Finger Rumple
It read in about 3 minutes, proof that the pace of the action kept with the fury of the storm.
Well done.
This was a fine telling of a Selkie tale... and the ending was perfect... as Selkies I believe always disappear and they can only contact a human once every seven years? Lovely story, good luck in the contest!
Just... wow. Still packs a punch after several reads. The sense of mystery and romanticism really enrich it.