by inkandchalk
Ohh make me cum so hard ahhhh fuck me ol manor with your old dick ahhh ahhh❤
Thanks all for positive comments and suggestions... Look out for Confessions of a Check Out Chick Vol I - soon...
Cheers,
Phil.
Thanks all for positive comments and suggestions... Look out for Confessions of a Check Out Chick Vol I - soon...
Cheers,
Phil.
Enjoyed it but it seemed too short to allow the characters to reveal themselves.
Also, IMHO, with old manors, ancient buildings and so on, it might have been better with a period setting.
Anyway, Good Luck.
Very rich situation which begs for development. If expanded to include some characterization and emotion, it could be an incredible base for a fairly long story.
has been mentioned on today's New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.