by kiwiwolf
I love this series and am happy to say I'm not disappointed with this one. This whole story is great! I hope there is more coming soon.
Just don't make us wait so long for the next one....
Reading installments of this story are addictive. And over much too soon. Thank you for feeding my habit.
Plenty of interest & love your plot development.
I hope to see more soon.
Aussie
I am so glad you had continued this story. It's great.
JUST DON'T MAKE US WAIT SO LONG FOR THE NEXT ONE....PLEASE
I didn't read any previous chapters, so I lack plot background but I would say story is very well written by a professional writer.The only comment I would offer is that the story would be more appropriate in a mystery collection rather than Literotica. As a whodunit fan I don't mind, but others might be misled. Good story though. I'll have to try preceding chapters. Yhe Ct. Yankee
This story has me setting on the edge of my seat. This story has it all sex, adventure and suspense. The chapter numbers from site to site are hard to follow how ever.
Tucson
It's been worth the wait, although a bit long. Well written and enjoyable to read.
Really excellent. Great story. Loved it and have loved all the other chapters. Please continue and not as long for the next chapter.
I enjoy reading your work.. looking forward to reading future installments
I never thought that I would enjoy anything where couples are involved. Boy was i wrong. This is absolutely wonderfull! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!
why waiting so long,and the story is so good.