All Comments on 'The Prize'

Could have done without the clinical statistical breakdown of all the women, which took a bit away from the story. Just a suggestion, but using words instead of numbers usually seems to work better.

Story wanders... Makes you think there is a point, even from the title, but there really isn't. The prize is much like what you would expect to receive at a Timeshare presentation; letting the reader invest time and then wait for a return (payback) which never comes.