All Comments on 'The Medicine Show'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Only one tiny problem

Nice and hot. I do have one quibble, though - this story is set in a time LONG before Dr. Grafenberg "discovered" the G spot. I can buy that a slick snake-oil huckster might have discovered a spot in a woman that gave her great pleasure... but he wouldn't CALL it a G spot because that name wouldn't be coined for decades.

Tail End PeteTail End Peteover 18 years ago
Good start

Now write the next chapter. Oh, and get someone for Clyde. I think he needs some relief as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Fantastic story, but even better in real life !

Like I said, this would no doubt be much better to live out in real life.

hislittlechinagirlhislittlechinagirlover 8 years ago

I love these two characters, they're adorably witty together, and I sincerely hope this gets a sequel.

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Great romance of the old west

Although certain concepts had not been discovered at the time, the story is very pleasant, well reported. I liked.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

rightbankrightbankalmost 7 years ago
Western Romantic Drama

I wish we had a long list of chapters to read.

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