All Comments on 'The Masquerade'

Well written, and well crafted. Lez zex, gender bblending and just the right amount of kink all presented in a way that flows well and reads well.

Good Luck with the contest :)

Very creative. Nicely crafted. ~Imp

and the interaction among the characters. Very fun read. Good luck on the contest!

Kept my attention to the very end and was filled with action!

but built well toward the fine climax. Good luck!

start but I love the good girl gone bad and once more with good winning and holding sway over bad. I'd love the address of that party.

Nice mixture of the festive and the grotesque, the sensual and the unnerving.

Nice story Daddio...you never fail to hold my attention. Good luck!

Cookie :)

This was pure fun! And this line: "Well I'll be damned" and her response, "You already are." Ha! Loved it! Could see her expression and everything. Classic! Good job, lots of luck! :)

Unbeliveably hot in a twisted erotic kind of way.

with your twisted imagination. LOL

Bizarre, grotesk, and entertaining to read.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

A very erotic out take on 'The Devil Went Down To Georgia'.

Nice piece of work.

Well done.

because of too much detail, especially of the costumes thre girls were wearing. The sex was hot but sometimes a bit over the top. A fun read but not really scary.

what a story line that was!!! I really liked it..as weird as it was ~ but, hey....it's an erotic Halloween Story!!!

AWESOME JOB!!!

~Honey

Hot, twisted, horrific and just really,really well done. I love it.

Strange, but nicely done. I think it was a little slow to begin with also. But I liked that Prudence went bad. I love it when good girls get corrupted :D. Good luck with the contest.

Great job, EB. Sex so carnal and almost carnival in spirit. Like a weird, over the top Mardi Gras of horrific porportions. This is Halloween!

Mephistopheles never had it so good. A parson's daughter every Halloween!

Loved it, hope you do real well.

There are changes of pace, timbre and focus that clash a tad but, it was real good.

Really great halloween story....though how you managed to write that where I knew where each character was and what they were doing without confusion is beyond me. Very well-written, and spooky-funny (Elvis gave me a snicker fit).

The line 'pulling himself through puberty' is a keeper. Wello done.

definitely... different. But gripped me from the first paragraph. You had to pay attention to keep from getting lost, lol... lots of twists, I like it!

very good write kept my attention you have a very good talent

nicely written, with a lot of twists and turns but was kinda long, it just kept going on and on ......

very hot!