All Comments on 'The Magic Book'

You've been mentioned in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout.

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This has a totally fun premise. The sex was hot, the idea was great, and I loved the ending.

Enjoyed every word of this story. What a fun and erotic story. Hope you find the book soon!

The one part gives a whole new perspective on a "circle jerk!" Best to you on the contest!

Excellent.Great premise, well executed - the pace and detail were just right.

My only quibble, and its a very selfish one, is that you lost the book! man was looking forward to a great many sequels. But then maybe the book has to stay where it is to work.

If this were to happen in real life..there sure as hell would be a lot less grumpy people in this world...you would have a line of people just waiting to be put in the next chapter...ahhhh the never ending story

Still don't know how you do it but what the hell, who cares as long as you churn out such outstanding stories.

well paced, believable, a touch of magic and a whole lot of fun. Thank you.

Good luck in the contest. ~Imp

I love to camp and fish, add that with nude girls and what could be better. Loved the book that never saves the words, intriguing <grin thanks for the read (~_~) good luck and Happy Nude Day

I enjoyed reading this very much. Very interesting and erotic .