All Comments on 'The Legend of Ruby's Place'

A delightful Halloween tale and that ending was very horrific and unsettling. The location - not a place I would want to visit soon. Terrific Write!

Good luck in the contest!

I liked the way the sex played out between the couples. This was very hot and imaginative with an unexpected ending. Please keep writing Gem.

Now the season is complete. If the best writer on Lit didn't have a Halloween story, it just wouldn't be Halloween. Another highly imaginative and very well written story by Green Gem, A few years ago we had (MST) Must See TV. Gem's stories can only be described as M.R.F.(Must Read Fiction). Every new story is an event.

Thanks for sharing your talent.

You are the best Jade! Here I sit with a raging one after reading your story and no time left to do anything about it-for now-lol! Nice story line, well written, and hot as hell! Thanks for your "hard" work.

Chef Mike aka bigfungi4u

Jayde, you have clearly outdone yourself... just an incredible story. Paul

GG,

Once again, you have amazed us with your fabulous story telling. Thank-you for sharing and continuing to do what you do best.

Once again, the perfect blend, great charachters, a little eerieness, passion, super hot sex, all told perfectly by the greatest author!

Super great as always!

J

Great story - yet again. Loved it. Keep 'em coming.

H

Great story! hope there is an ending to the next chapter.

Fantastic tale as only GreenGem can tell them. Loved the set up then what to me felt like a hot fever dream, as all of my sexual buttons got pushed, with predictable results! But as always an nice unexpected twist at the end. GG, you're the best ever! I miss you.

Fantastic tale as only GreenGem can tell them. Loved the set up then what to me felt like a hot fever dream, as all of my sexual buttons got pushed, with predictable results! But as always an nice unexpected twist at the end. GG, you're the best ever! I miss you.

LOVE the ending!

...and hope it's the start of a new chapter.