by Zazbek
I didn't think we were going to get any new chapters but I'm really glad your writing some more. Its been awhile and I had given up hope, but glad to see my hope restored, I love your stories and hope we can look forward to more.
Thanks again
I was very surprised to see you come back after having left for a few years. I have to say I enjoyed the new release, but it doesn't have the same feel as the previous five chapters. It was written differently, in a different style. Is this the same author or is it someone else?
glad you are back.
hope you can at least finish off the senior year with this series. lotta threads that can be followed up for more stories. parents vs all the girls, parents and the incest, girlfriend vs girl jealosies, the bondage teacher, christmas, valentines day, de prom and others.
I loved the original series. This new one is just as great if not better. The whole semi-consensual part is really great. It shows an evolution in the character. Please keep adding to the series.
Thank you for continuing. This story line is so hot. Hope the next chapter does not take to long being posted.
sure hope you do more on this story. i hope you follow up on all the people in the story. sure must be much, much more.
this surely is the best of many many stories i have read on literotica. being invalid and much time at the puter cuz its only one step from my bed i read about 8 hours a day so there are many stories i have gone over. so far in 8 monthe this is the second comment i have written. and by far the best series i have read thasnks
I hope that u continue with this series - the writing is good, the character is very interesting and the sex is very hot. Keep up the good work
I just read parts 1-3 and this. Amazing. I didn't recall the counsilor though. Am I missing some?
Great Story man please keep writing them ...nuff said
Zazbek has been bookmarked in my IE for years. MY favorite mind control guy!
Love the High School Hypnotist. Took a while to get back to discover this follow up. Can't wait to find out what happens to that bitch, Amy.
Willing women, hot teachers, and a very sexy sister to boot. What more could we ask for?
Working on a pheromone story myself and your stories were the begining inspiration for it.
Keep it up! ;-)
I loved it, but the beginning was a bit hard to follow with all the names, or lack there of.
I realy apreciate your writing, and I'm quite disapointed to see that you haven't pubished anything since some years...
Hope you are well
Keep on writing
are you going to tell us what happened when Amy came over for her lessons?
Come on, dude. This was one of the 1st stories I read when I found this site back in '09... and I REALLY wish you'd come back and give us some more....
Good story, as far as it goes, but you left way too many hanging plots, and brought none to a conclusion.
This is a story I really enjoyed. Sexy but with a heart and a brilliant pacing.
Get an editor. Learn about pacing. For fucks sake. This is the shit I'd expect from a ninth grade writer....