All Comments on 'The Gift of Being Wrong'

really hot story. I found it a little hard to believe that she would have given in so easily, though, and that he was such a superstud, but it was okay for fantasy.

I enjoyed it immensely. There was good dialogue and it was very descriptive. It also illustrates the importance of a first kiss.

Well written, and imaginative. I work retail also and know the fun of those wonderful day after Christmas blues. Good luck in the contest

Since I have a real thing for older men this really turned me on. It was such a fun read. Good luck!

Cookie :)

Pretty hot SJ!

... to 5-bomb a story when it deserves it. ;)

Happy Holidays & good luck in the contest! ~Imp

Yikes, that was hot!!!

Very nicely done SJ, Can I meet you under the misletoe?

Abs.

Very hot story, SJ. You know I love a mature theme and this was perfectly drawn. You hit a nerve with me, kid.

Now, let's see in ?? years I'll be old enough...

.... nice and hot. Thank you for your overly warm tale SJ. Good luck in the contest and happy holidays.

Always, Lizzy

As an older man, and retail refugee, that struck a positive nerve. Loved your story. Hope you do well in the contest. The prize would sure help considering your own refugee status from Rita.

izzling! (& I have to echo Cookie RE older men)

This was a nice way to start the day...

Best of luck to you in the contest!

I have a soft spot for older men myself... so this one definitely hit the nail on the head... so to speak... enough euphemisms, the story was HOT, alright? Great job, loved it, good luck!

Just the fantasy a dirty old man like me loves.

That was very hot SJ!

Well done.

You've been a very very good girl this year. And now that you've tolerated what life has to offer, I hope your fantasies come true .... this one is sure to be worth filling.

Very hot, very imaginative, and very excellent character development.

I kind of wish you had extended the whole seduction scene, it just seemed that they had sex awfully fast and it's not as a believable story because of that. (and why is the difference in age so important anyway...doesn't true love overcome such a trivial thing?) Good luck in the contest!

Tight and hot Sophia. Very enjoyable!!

Tight and hot Sophia. Very enjoyable!!

You've warmed this Horny 'ol Sailor all over with this one. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Very good writing in a hot holiday story that had good beat and was easy to dance to. I gave it a five. :) Good luck in the contest, SJ.

Rumple

good job sj... really liked the story... good luck!

...is the sound I'm making as a result of your story! My god, it was HOT! Good luck in the contest!

Great job, SJ...good luck in the contest

~Honey

A very 'hot', well woven tale of lust and learning. Very well done and an enjoyable read, Sophia. Thank you.

A very 'hot', well woven tale of lust and learning. Very well done and an enjoyable read, Sophia. Thank you.

great work SJ, loved the older guy/younger woman theme .. and of course the HOT sex and flirting between the two of them ..

Nice to hear Santa got laid this year. I'm tired of doing the old fart. ;-)

Seriously though, it was a nice tale. Good luck in the contest.

Jenny

...some nice little touches to increase the realism and some naughtiness and hesitation to increase the tension.

Santa's gift giving ability is amazing. Gift, after GIFT...after GIFT.... I think I should put my wife on the naughty list tonight.

When I'm done reading through the Holiday Contest entries, I'm coming back to this one by which to go to bed tonight. Best of luck, SJ.

Very evocative language and nicely drawn characters. Thank you for a lovely read and best of luck.

I loved it. Now I'm going to have dirty fantasies about the Santa Claus at my mall...cuz I've seen him and he's kinda good-looking. Hmmm....thanks alot for putting these kinda thoughts in my mind :) Great story, very well written with a nice flow

Happy Holidays and good luck,

Ali

Lemme be your Santa Claus *grin*

Thanks, SJ

Very good and naughty as always. Good luck in the contest!

Remember, Santa has a new toy for every good girl. *g*

I really enjoyed your story. Excellent voice...great plot set up, only wish there was a continuation. Perhaps another installment for New Years?

Makes me wonder why I ever quit my retail managment job! Very, very hot, and extremely erotic. Nice job.

But I can't ho ho ho worth a damn and my belly don't jiggle... hell I can't grow a decent beard. I'll just have to read your story again!!

It's very good!

Simple and elegant mixture of seduction, surrender, and sexual heat. I so loved her resistance and uncertainty at the start. (The way a woman's mind works is still the sexiest thing in the world!)

The story flowed beautifully and was a pleasure to read, and the way you pared it down to the bare essentials made the sensual details really stand out. A lovely tale of a woman's willing seduction told with elegance and grace.

And a lot still to go. Nice work, SJ, most enjoyable.

Alex

It was great but I only wish it was longer. Fun reading.

Very erotic. And very well written, great job with the characters.

Brian

i must express utter admiration of your writing, sophia jane. thanks for the effort, the work to bring these stories to us.

Loved it.

i was actually reading ur pieces on pussy pride before this and thinking people read these things to boost their confidence or try and find the confidence but it doesnt really work til it works...if that makes sense, like people have to come upon pussy pride in their own time and experience. thats not a criticism just a thought that ur piece gave me. anyway, THIS fictional piece blew me away after thinking you were just a how to writer, silly me, ok off to read some more! :)