All Comments on 'The Gift'

Wow am I envious of mitch.... That was a great bit of story telling and hotter than paprika nice one

There has to be a certain something about a story to keep me reading after the first page.As I said earlier well done ... UnicornUK

Unusually creative. As I began reading the story, I was certain I could predict its ending. What a pleasant suprise. A great piece of literotica. The story was arousing and intriguing! Well done

To the author:

I would love to see this launched into an adult book collection. The story is just so creative and so full of potential, I really think that you would have a very good shot at getting this out on the adult book market.

that was so good i will have to read it again and again

I enjoy reading new postings on Literotica, but I very seldom vote. After reading "The Gift" not only did I give it a 5, but I felt compelled to write to you and let you know just how much I enjoyed this story. It is probably the most original work of art I have read on Literotica. Extremely well done! Keep up the great work!

It was amazing. Only thing was the pregancy references (not the late ones, the ones like baby tube) made me feel a bit off...

They was absolutely nothing I don't like about this story. For me it was kind of like the Matrix. You start out confused but excited. As the story goes on you get all the surprises. I just wish it were me.

great writing and keep writing your stories your way.

Very very good story. Creative.. and very .. stimulating.

I liked you story and would like to see more of this series. Thanks for putting this forward.

You really should consider turning this into a series of erotic ficition. I'm a fiction reader and this storyline holds a certain feel to it that mixes mystery , myth , fantasy , magic , and sex into a beautiful masterpiece. Please for the love of all things that are beautiful continue your writings about Mitch and " The Sisterhood "

truly enjoyed it, would like to see the storyline completed!!

Thank you

More this was such an interesting story and I genuinely want more so please (puppy dog eyes )

Would love to read more.

I would like to have more of this story

I have seen this before. However, there were several chapters. Where did it go?

Where are the rest of the chapters? I was hoping this time when I read it that the story would be finished but instead parts of it are missing. Please bring the rest of story out and finish it.

Arousing erotica that morphed into every man's dream. Who would not want to be Mitch? Nicely plotted, well done on all levels.

I hope you'll write more about Mitch and the girls.

Not bad. Interesting reading.