All Comments on 'The Elevator'

Wow ... what can I say? While I've read many erotic stories online, this was the first to inspire me to master the art of scrolling with my left hand so that I could read, and use my right hand to slide between my labia and rub my clit until I came. *blushes* This was an incredibly HOT story, and I DO hope that you continue to write more ... especially about my favorite heroine, angelslut, and her deliciously dominant master. Accompanying them on his journey to mold her into exactly what he desires would be very ... steamy. *winks*

Again, GREAT story!

Kaci

It's hot. So it's a five. But the best? I don't think so. Close to a four actually. *shrugs* To each his/her own.

SN

Yessir, the best I've read in a long time. Wonderful lead-in, fantastic descriptions and character development ... yes, all these things count! I've read a zillion of these, but they generally go for overkill. Dillinger knows pacing, ie: how far to take it and when to give it up and/or move on.

Just great writing.

I'd love to see a continuing adventure series with these two, but perhaps that would delve into overkill.

very, very sexy. well-paced, good lead-in, and, while this might seem minor, you bothered to use spell-check... nothing pisses me off more than a good erotic story with shitty spelling and punctuation. nice job, please write more!

I wish it would happen to me!

...Holy shit.

Loved the writing, buildup, characters, deliciously intence raw sex.I want to be Angelslut and wildly fucked. Excellent, please write more.

Bev

Especially the start in the elevator[we call them lifts]some are terrified of them I can think of nothing better than sharing a lift with a hot woman,the atmosphere seems to be electric,you both know what the other is thinking?

It also made me laugh and remember the time I was in a packed lift with a full arsed woman pressed back against me,we call it frottage.I quickly got a raging erection and had to travel to several other floors after she got out before I could leave ,in a strange stooped over awkward manner.Some concerned woman asked me if I had a bad back.Little did she know

pretty great stuff. it would have been nice if you had checked your grammar though, like incomplete sentences... i agree, there's nothing worse than a great story with bad spelling and grammar. not a concern for you though! keep it up.

No matter how many stories I read off this site, I always return to this one at some point. It is fabulously written and never fails to get me off. Thanks so much for writing it!

K-

This hot scene had me jacking off with one hand and scrolling with the other until I came all over my pants!! Then I licked it off and began again - so much hardness so many orgasms - delirious stuff!!

I wish you were my master ;)

I liked how you described the process of the sex and how you have used caps to emphasize certain words :D

Great story. How many cocks did she take? The pace was perfect, the fucking just kept ramping up until the final cum tsunami. Not sure how you could improve on it. Maybe write the next chapter and have the athletic guys be a swim team and gang fuck her in the pool in front of the crowd all over again.

This story gave me the best self-stimulated orgasm ever

It was one awesome orgy. Wow!! Just wow!!. It was so damn amazing.

Is it Ginsberg or something👉🏾😔👈🏾

It was better than average. There were of course, the usual spelling and grammar mistakes, but it was okay. It could and should have had more descriptive content on the basic content, and of course, this story surely is only just beginning!? There is plenty of space for lots more ad infinitum!