by Charles Petersunn
i think he will be very much happier where he ended up lol!
Thanks Charles!!
Highly amusing....well-written descent into the doll world.... did he have children in there?? Did the dolls miss the new clothes and trinkets he used to bring?? I wonder if Laura ever found two female dolls had been put together with lucky Mr. Widdams?? LOL
as a guy who is also a doll owner .. I found this to be a great story ... thank you for it :-)
Bravo! 5 stars for a well written and unusual story.
Great job on the story and i saw the episode you talked about it was good.
Thoroughly enjoyable, could be the beginning of a series as Milton gains confidence. Thanks
i couldnt even finish reading the story because I kept picturing Milton from office space. :)
Used to watch The Zone all the time as a kid. Missed that episode, though. Good ending to the story.
I know you may not have set it up as a series, but it would be a fantastic one. Please at least one more chapter.
They're action figures!
Very enjoyable tale. The characters were fun, and the scenes with the girls quite arousing. Excellent story!
Just wanted to say that this was a really good story, Keep up the good writing.
Excellent story, very well-written. The sex was nicely balanced with the rest of the plot, and your technical skills are praiseworthy.
Do keep writing, even if it's not about Milton.
Really interesting story, I remember the Twighlight zone and this was a good rendition. I will try to read more of your stories, cheers.
Urges to continue the storytelling in a 1950's suburban bungalow, a mansion, a Barbie Dream House, a log cabin, a Louisiana shotgun, a country cottage, a southern plantation, a western ranch, a hillbilly shack.