by JoeDreamer
Do love your sense of humour. Great continuation but you are a long way from finished - what are you doing reading the comments, get writing.
This has gotta be my favorite all time incarnation of the devil. Keep up the great writing Joe, I'm anxious to see what else is going to happen.
Like all of your best stories, this one goes places and touches topics one would never think of. You (or your characters) ask questions and bring up thoughts that are unique and inspiring. You write well, (apart from the occasional grammar glitch) and that doesn't hurt a bit. ;-)
Nor, of course, does your excellent description of sex; sex as love, or sex as sex.
Keep up the good work!