by Nightbird
I enjoyed the simplistic recollection from the man's view. It is great to see such sweet romanticism from a man. I especially enjoyed the part where he asked her to dance. Oh hell, I liked the whole thing. I hope you will posting more soon. If you can do this with a romantic venture I can't wait to see what you do with an erotic romp. tws
Loved this story the first time I read it...and still feel the same now...A simple story with so much feeling...Please don't stop Cowboy, would love to read more from you...
I love how you write, brings back the feelings of how romance should be .. You have a wonderful talent , Please don't ever stop writing ..
BabyBlackRose @-->-->--
You have such a romantic touch, I look forward to your next story.
Hugs
A lovely tale NB, you show the simple things can be the most sweet. Leaves me with a soft sigh.
A wonderful story of romantic innocence, woven together with such gentle tenderness that it causes a woman's heart to swoon. Don't stop now, you're just getting us all warmed up :)
Took my breath away. Thank you. Can't wait until your next submission.
Very romantic and sweet. We all need somebody like you to show us a little romance, NB. Nice job.
I loved this story, NB! It was sheer romance and unexpected in that...it made me smile and want lasagne too. hee hee! The dancing on the sand was marvelous stuff...barefoot with only tiki lights and soft music! Melts. :)
I would like to see a chapter 2 to this. This is wonderful writing and romantic.
Jaen
I was drawn in from the beginning. I love your focus on the romance. Thank you for reminding me it is alive!
The story is absolutely sweet and it made my heart melt. Thank you.
I loved your story NB. It made my heart melt and made me know what it feels like to be in love.
I love this - it brings back such memories! Thank you.
That was so beautiful. I've never been on a date like that. I am so utterly jealous right now. I dont know what to do with myself. If that is a true story man... Where can I find a guy like that?
I really enjoyed your story this morning, thanks for sharing it. I think a date like that would be more than just fun, it would be delightfully perfect. ~ Red
Head scratcher, it never came. Just a nice picnic...
Why did you not continue very touching beautiful story? It makes my heart cry for a type of love never achieved!
Oh, wow! Very short, but flowing well and wonderfully romantic. I look forward to seeing further works and would encourage you to consider longer ones (to make the pleasure last).