by just 4 fun
Find yourself an editor. The grammar and spelling mistakes were distracting. Other than that it was a good story.
This was a good episode. We needed more background on our hot little escort and her "company". There used to be such an enterprise in my sedate suburb. They had radio-dispatched limos to carry the girls around from client to client and, until the cops caught on, were grossing over $10K/week. And this was 25 years ago!
Very nice, erotic, and to a certain extent, real. And as for grammer, who cares?