All Comments on 'The Christmas Gift'

..story as usual honey

Taltos

Happy holidays & good luck in the contest! ~Imp

Great story! I really enjoyed it!

Great story, sweetie. I'm glad you submitted this one. Huge grins still.

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Yum! This is delectable. Very hot! Good luck!

A very hot and enjoyable story Honey. What a wonderful Christmas present! Thank you for giving it to us. I feel like I need to clean up my.............. er Great Story!

story, and not just your own fantasy. Nicely written. Good luck in the contest.

I see Santa likes going up the chimney.

Great story Honey!

Abs

Send a "kinky package" to your significant other, or object of love interest. Very hot story Honey, good luck in the contest!

...and that's not easy, believe you me. :)

Good writing, Honey. IMHO, you did an incredible job of handling second person.

Rumple

I hate this POV. hate it hate it hate it. Yet somehow you made it work. And that, is about as impressive a feat of authorly skill as I have seen in ages.

I don't usually like stories in the present tense, this was really good and hot and smutty, as smutty as some of mine are. I would truly love to exchange Christmas presents with you, especially something like the one described in the story. Good luck in the contest.

with the POV, which I am horrible at. Sometimes wishes and fantasies do come true. Good luck in the contest and happy holidays.

Always, Lizzy

Wonderful. How did you know?

Another hot one honey

Just superb. The titillation in the build-up. very erotic. I just wish I were that lover to lead you into your anal experience.

Ciao B

a very 'snow melting' read <grin>

Merry Christmas and Good Luck ...hunni

What a way to start my morning! Good luck Honey!

Cookie :)

Honey.. ya know I love yer stories almost as much as I wub ya... good job.... good luck

such a HOT story Honey ... I could see that scene so vividly, as if I was in the room, a silent observer

Um... yes, "Wow!"

I think I need a shower now...

but I mean that in the best possible way ; )

Best of luck in the contest!!

...that guy...as long as you're that woman.

Mine too! Honey, very sexy stuff, babe. Loved it. Hot story from a hot writer.

Can't believe I forgot to leave a comment when I first read this. Fantastic story, Honey. Ring my door bell anytime.

Honey, I look forward to your stories, written with care, sizzling sex, making me live the experience.

Babe i think its time for another 'game'!!!

Hot as ever!

Very hot story, Honey! Best of luck in the contest.

Loved it!! Very hot.

Honey, your story definitely passed the "wet test"! Extremely hot! God, I've got to go shower. Good luck in the contest.

And a good one. I like the gentle ending and the touches like the pillow on the couch. It shows a balance that I found very realistic and appropriate. Do keep that Honey cummin', please...

Well, sure I do!

...one would almost think you're into that sort of stuff!

Beyond all that, tho...this story is full of the sort of details that you excel in, and that's why your story column is full of little red 'H's! I can't wait for the next contest, if this is what it takes to make you write! *kisses*

I'm not really into anal, but your story is well written and you have great details :) Almost makes me want to try anal....well almost :)

Happy Holidays Honey :)

I didn't think I was into being a sub until I read this story. Thanks for making MY honey cum.

....you enjoyed your "present"! Damn, this is the 4th story of yours that I have read, and the 4th one to turn me on as well! I got EXTREMELY aroused by the idea of dominating a girl and fucking her in the ass! Not to mention ass licking and spanking! Very erotic! You're rather good as an erotic writer!

Nice story, I haven't submitted a story for a few years now and yours has inspired a few ideas.

I liked this story, I would have liked to have seen a stronger acting out of the D & S. Possibly though my experience and taste runs slightly more in depth or dominant per say but I did enjoy it. Doesn't seem like the fantasy would be all that difficult becoming a reality, not at all.

you realy turned me on and got my panties wet .Ihad to stop reading and just finged my self. please write more.

Now less likely to happen than ever before.