All Comments on 'The Chocoholic'

This story rocks. ffreak is an excellent author.

You should take this theme and write in other genres also. An incest story, an exhibitionism story, a loving wives story, etc...all based on a messy theme. It is so seductive and romantic, all at the same time, but so many people are afraid of the mess and possible stain-damage involved that they won't even try to duplicate the descriptions that you wrote about in this story. In my opinion, if everyone did this with a willing participant with the calm and caring that was ascribed to Larry in the story, there would be far more happy couples out there. Unfortunately, the "messiest" most people get is the "happy-ending" that Larry received as a reward. Somehow, THAT is ok, but becoming a chocolate-covered treat is not? Come on, people! Let's EAT!!! ;-) Please keep this theme going!